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Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Compare/ Contrast Essay Final Draft


 

In life our teachers can help shape the people we turn out to be. They are role models for young impressionable students. I believe that being confident and being flexible to the students’ needs are very important qualities for teachers to have. Once students can feel comfortable to explore their minds, be creative and ask questions;  they are then able to see their true potential. Teachers have a very important job that helps shape our future society. Ms. Gruwell and Ms. Watson are similar in many ways, but they both taught at very different schools with students that had a different upbringing. They both wanted to be exactly where they were in their career and adapted to the students they were teaching. They did this by being determined and doing what they thought was right for their students despite the schools beliefs.

 

                Ms. Gruwell taught English in 1992 at Woodrow Wilson High School in Long Beach, California. The school did not have a lot of money and had some of the lowest scholastic records in the district since the school was forced to do a voluntary integration act. As a result, there was a lot of racial tension and gang violence on a daily basis. The other teachers at Woodrow Wilson were upset about the integration act, and did not believe in many of the students. As quoted by Ms. Gruwell, “What's the point of a voluntary integration program if the kids making it to high school have a 5th grade reading level? All the program is doing is warehousing these kids until they're old enough to disappear.” She was excited about teaching and seemed to be the only one who cared about the future of the students.  On the other hand, Ms. Watson taught history of Art at the conservative Wellesley College for girls. The year was 1953 in Massachusetts. All of the students were very proper and bright. The teachers’ main focus was preparing the girls for marriage and keeping their husbands’ happy. People who did not believe in the conservative ways of living were looked down upon and Ms. Watson was more liberal. She asked the principal if she was proud of the girls and she said yes. Then Ms. Watson Stated, “Half of them are already married, and the other half, oh just give it a month or so! I mean, it's really only a matter of time! That's what they're doing here, right; they're just biding their time until somebody proposes!” Ms. Watson had come to Wellesley to make a difference.

 

                On the first day of school Ms. Gruwell wrote her name on the chalkboard board while everyone sat in their seats surrounded by their own race. The classroom was very plain with the desks for the students, the teacher’s desk and a chalk board. She was very excited to teach at Woodrow Wilson high, and came to this school because of the voluntary integration act. As she was trying to take attendance they were all talking and laughing, just ignoring her. During attendance two of the boys started to stand up to fight and she said, “Please sit back in your seats.” Of course they didn’t hear her or just didn’t care. So she ran out of the class and got somebody to break up the fight. At Wellesley College Ms. Watson came into class saying” Good morning this is History of Art, and we’ll be following Dr. Staunton’s Syllabus. The girls were all quietly waiting, sitting in their seats looking perfectly poised. One of the girls jumped up to turn off the lights before she could finish asking for them to be turned off. “From the beginning man has always had an impulse to create art; can anyone tell me what this is?” The girls knew everything about every piece of art she showed because they read and memorized the whole syllabus. One of the students suggested they all go to study since they already knew what she was going to teach them. Without her saying anything they all got up and left.

 

Despite the challenges that Ms. Gruwell and Ms. Watson faced, neither of them gave up on what they believed was right for their students. Ms. Gruwell had the class do a self-evaluation and one of the students gave himself an F. Given the reputation of the students at her school any of the other teachers wouldn’t care, but Ms. Watson cared.  She was outside the classroom with him and said,

You know what this is? This is a Fuck You to me and everyone in this class. I don't want excuses. I know what you're up against. We're all of us up against something. So you better make up your mind, because until you have the balls to look me straight in the eye and tell me this is all you deserve, I am not letting you fail. Even if that means coming to your house every night until you finish the work. I see who you are. Do you understand me? I can see you. And you are not failing.”

In Ms. Watson’s class a student hadn’t showed up to class since she was married. Then suddenly she showed up to class and Ms. Watson told her that she expects attendance from her.  Ms. Watson was then informed that the faculty turns their head on a few absences when a girl gets married. Miss Watson then states, “why don’t you just get married when you are a freshmen that way you can graduate without actually ever having to step foot on campus. Come to class do the work or ill fail you.” 

 

The teachers were determined for the students to see life differently. Ms. Watson helped one of her students apply for Yale Law School, and she got accepted. So a disgruntled, conservative student wrote a newspaper article stating her opinion on the subject. The next day she walked into class and said,

Quiet. Today you just listen. What will future scholars see when they study us, a portrait of women today? There you are ladies: the perfect likeness of a Wellesley graduate, Magna Cum Laude, doing exactly what she was trained to do.” She showed them advertisements for housewives. “A Rhodes Scholar, I wonder if she recites Chaucer while she presses her husband's shirts. Slide - now you physics majors can calculate the mass and volume of every meatloaf you make. Slide - A girdle to set you free. What does that mean? What does that mean? What does it mean? I give up, you win. The smartest women in the country, I didn't realize that by demanding excellence I would be challenging... what did it say? The roles you were born to fill? It's, uh, it's my mistake. Class Dismissed.”

Then she walked out. The girls sat quietly. They finally started to realize what she was trying to show them, that they can be more than a housewife.  In Ms. Gruwell’s class the kids were passing around a drawing of a person with big lips while laughing about it. Once it was passed to a boy in the front she grabbed it from him. She then finally got mad and made them close their workbooks.  She said,

I saw a picture just like this once, in a museum. Only it wasn't a black man, it was a Jewish man. And instead of the big lips he had a really big nose, like a rat's nose. And these drawings were put in the newspapers by the most famous gang in history. They started out poor and angry and everybody looked down on them. They took over countries. You want to know how? They just wiped out everybody else. Yeah, they wiped out everybody they didn't like and everybody they blamed for their life being hard. And one of the ways they did it was by doing this: see, they print pictures like this in the newspapers, Jewish people with big, long noses... blacks with big, fat lips. In fact, life would be a whole lot better if they were all dead. That's how a holocaust happens. And that's what you all think of each other.”

 The students hadn’t heard of the holocaust, but she opened their eyes to learn from the holocaust. She made them interested in learning about it and relating it to their own lives.

 

          In conclusion, both of these teachers showed the students that they are capable of more than they realized. Ms. Gruwell showed her students that they deserve more than the gang life and opened their eyes to see life in a positive way. Ms. Watson’s mission was to get her students to see that they are capable of being something more than a housewife. The teachers were both looked down upon by their co-workers for being different. Ultimately, they showed their students that they don’t have to be like everyone else.  They both gave hope that their students had never known.

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